User blog comment:Helel ben Shahaar/WL: Test/@comment-24101790-20190401182801

Some minor things I noticed in the opening:

"Hel is back yet again, and as a speacial treate (special treat)"

"And who better to herald the coming of a new era then (than) one of our new authors"

More of an aesthetic thing, but I would link any instance where he lists a story or author just to improve the likelihood of people reading the post and following links to their other works or liked authors (although someone could argue against linking the other authors as the focus is on Locked so I could see not linking them).

Other than that, I don't really see any other issues. After a few others review this and weigh in, I'd say it's alright to go live.